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S:Good morning,ma'am.Are you ready to order?W:Yes,Could you tell me what kebabs is?S:Sure,Kebabs are small pieces of meat.W:That's sounds good.I'll have Roast Lamb and Vegetable Kebabs.S:Which would you like rice or potatoes with that?W:rice.S:ok,what would you like... 顯示更多 S:Good morning,ma’am.Are you ready to order? W:Yes,Could you tell me what kebabs is? S:Sure,Kebabs are small pieces of meat. W:That’s sounds good.I’ll have Roast Lamb and Vegetable Kebabs. S:Which would you like rice or potatoes with that? W:rice. S:ok,what would you like appectizer? W:could you tell me what soup of the day? S:today’s soup of the day is fresh tomato and basil. W:how about avocado Florentine? S:it’s fresh avocado filled with shnimp. W:hum…I’ll have arocado Florentine? S:ok,what dessert do you want?we have flan and fresh fruit salad. W:what is flan? S:a creamy dessert made from eggs and milk and today’s fresh fruits are :apple,melon and pineapple. W:umm…I’llhave flan. S:what is the beverage with that? W:herbal tea. S:we have chamomile and orange spice which one do you want? W:orange spice. S:ok!you order is roast lamb and vegertable kebabs and appetizer is arocado Florentine.with dessert is flan.and your beverages is herbal tea with orange spice. W:yes. S:I’ll be back with you as soon as your order is ready.
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Hello 你好, 個人建議修正如下 (加註 => ): S:Good morning,ma'am.Are you ready to order? W:Yes,Could you tell me what kebabs is? => W:Yes,Could you tell me what kebab is(or kebabs are)? kebab : 【印度】烤肉串 S:Sure,Kebabs are small pieces of meat. W:That’s sounds good.I’ll have Roast Lamb and Vegetable Kebabs. => W:That sounds good. I'll have Roast Lamb and Vegetable Kebabs. S:Which would you like rice or potatoes with that? => S:Which one would you like for that with rice or potato? or : Do you prefer that with rice or potato? W:rice. S:ok,what would you like appectizer? => S:Ok,what (kind of) appetizer do you like? appetizer : 開胃菜 W:could you tell me what soup of the day? S:today’s soup of the day is fresh tomato and basil. => S:Today's soups are fresh tomato and basil (for choice). W:how about avocado Florentine? S:it’s fresh avocado filled with shnimp. W:hum…I’ll have arocado Florentine? => W:Hum…I'll have avocado Florentine ( as my appetizer). S:ok,what dessert do you want?we have flan and fresh fruit salad. W:what is flan? S:a creamy dessert made from eggs and milk and today’s fresh fruits are :apple,melon and pineapple. W:umm…I’llhave flan. => W:Umm…I'll have flan( as my dessert). --- might be typo for S:what is the beverage with that? W:herbal tea. S:we have chamomile and orange spice which one do you want? => S:We have chamomile and orange spice and which one do you prefer? W:orange spice. S:ok!you order is roast lamb and vegertable kebabs and appetizer is arocado Florentine.with dessert is flan.and your beverages is herbal tea with orange spice. => S:Ok!your order (set) is : roast lamb and vegertable kebabs with rice, the appetizer with avocado Florentine, the dessert is flan and your beverage is herbal tea with orange spice. W:yes. S:I’ll be back with you as soon as your order is ready. => S:I'll be back as soon as your order is ready( or available). 2009-04-19 00:46:27 補充： 1. W:could you tell me what soup of the day? => W:could you tell me what soup of the day is? 2. flan => a flan --- sorry for the losses.
其他解答:
烤肉串不是kebab好嗎??kebab的類別有那麼多種,這樣用會混淆視聽喔! 烤肉串是sosatie|||||第四行: W:That’s sounds good.I’ll have Roast Lamb and Vegetable Kebabs. 前面那一句是錯的，一個句子怎麼會有兩個動詞呢? 直接說 That sounds good. 就好啦！ 第五行: S:Which would you like rice or potatoes with that? 這應該要把 rice or potatoes放到句子最後面比較好吧！ Which would you like with that, rice or potatoes? 第七行: S:ok,what would you like appectizer? 應該是: Ok, what appetizer would you like? 而且你的appetizer拼錯了喔！ 第八行: W:could you tell me what soup of the day? 你的間接問句的動詞不見了... 後面給它個be動詞： Could you tell me what soup of the day is? 第九行: S:today’s soup of the day is fresh tomato and basil. 這句看起來文法上是沒問題啦，只是很囉唆，也很繞舌，大可直接說: Today's soup is fresh tomato and basil. 第十一行: S:it’s fresh avocado filled with shnimp 應該是'shrimp"吧，你可能打太快了沒注意到。(下面第十二行那個肯定句應該不需要用問號結尾吧... 這樣感覺好像對自己要吃什麼都很沒把握的樣子...) 第十六行: W:umm…I’llhave flan. flan前面加個"a"會比較好: umm... I'll have a flan. 第十九行: S:we have chamomile and orange spice which one do you want 中間應該要斷句吧... 連在一起很怪(雖然是對話的東西啦，可是我們還是盡量讓句子是完整正確的！)。還有，通常在餐廳裡面服務生對客人是要很有禮貌的，所以後面那個問句還是用 which one would you like 會好一點！ We have chamomile and orange spice; which one would you like? 第二十一行: S:ok!you order is roast lamb and vegertable kebabs and appetizer is arocado Florentine.with dessert is flan.and your beverages is herbal tea with orange spice. 這句... 包括一開始應該用your order，中間有一些錯字和斷句問題，還有dessert那地方寫得很怪異。我直接幫你修一下好了: OK! Your order is roast lamb and vegetable kebabs; appetizer is arcado Florentine; a flan as your dessert; and your beverage is herbal tea with orange spice. 恩~~大概就這樣了吧！
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